Friday, July 8

Poem: I Sit

i sit
watching the steady
river of life
as it
flows past me

i see
hopes
dreams
colours

all i ask is a moment of
kindness

but even that
they do not give

all they see is
shame

i am
nothing

they are
everything

why should they care?

i sit
watching the steady
river of life
as it
flows past me

and no one looks my way

12 comments:

Spook said...

Aww. Short, bittersweet and lyrical - nice work!

Midnyte Reader said...

I like this poem. It really conveys emotions I've felt many times in my life.

Melody said...

Beautiful and heartwrenching in such a simple way! Can't wait to read more from you. :)

Rachel Brooks said...

Beautiful poem! I really like the picture you picked to go with the title.I hope you’re having an awesome weekend!

Also, I’m a new follower—wonderful blog! Stop by my blog and follow me too? :) http://rachelbrookswrites.blogspot.com/

Fairday Morrow said...

What a beautiful poem. It reminds me of how I felt back in high school. I really like the style that you used. Very powerful!

I found you through Book Blogs and signed up to follow you. When you have a chance- please stop by and follow the blog for my middle grade novel that I am hoping to get published. http://thesecretdmsfilesoffairdaymorrow.blogspot.com/

Take care-
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Jessica@Booked Up! said...

Great poem, short and beautiful! Love your blog, too!

Jessica from Booked Up!
http://bookedupbloggers.blogspot.com/

:)

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iLuvReadingTooMuch said...

Gorgeous! Absolutely amazing. Simple, but so deep :D I'm a new follower!

Rabiah
Confessions of a Readaholic

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Ann @ Blogging Profits Unleashed said...

It's been a long time since I read a poem. I must say this is a good one, I feel it and I like it. Keep it up!

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