i sit
watching the steady
river of life
as it
flows past me
i see
hopes
dreams
colours
all i ask is a moment of
kindness
but even that
they do not give
all they see is
shame
i am
nothing
they are
everything
why should they care?
i sit
watching the steady
river of life
as it
flows past me
and no one looks my way
watching the steady
river of life
as it
flows past me
i see
hopes
dreams
colours
all i ask is a moment of
kindness
but even that
they do not give
all they see is
shame
i am
nothing
they are
everything
why should they care?
i sit
watching the steady
river of life
as it
flows past me
and no one looks my way
11 comments:
Aww. Short, bittersweet and lyrical - nice work!
I like this poem. It really conveys emotions I've felt many times in my life.
Beautiful and heartwrenching in such a simple way! Can't wait to read more from you. :)
Beautiful poem! I really like the picture you picked to go with the title.I hope you’re having an awesome weekend!
Also, I’m a new follower—wonderful blog! Stop by my blog and follow me too? :) http://rachelbrookswrites.blogspot.com/
What a beautiful poem. It reminds me of how I felt back in high school. I really like the style that you used. Very powerful!
I found you through Book Blogs and signed up to follow you. When you have a chance- please stop by and follow the blog for my middle grade novel that I am hoping to get published. http://thesecretdmsfilesoffairdaymorrow.blogspot.com/
Take care-
Jess- although I may show up as Fairday, the main character from my novel. I can't figure out why that happens sometimes and I can't fix it. :)
Great poem, short and beautiful! Love your blog, too!
Jessica from Booked Up!
http://bookedupbloggers.blogspot.com/
:)
Gorgeous! Absolutely amazing. Simple, but so deep :D I'm a new follower!
Rabiah
Confessions of a Readaholic
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